4 Comments

I did catch where this was going early but boy did it deliver.

Expand full comment
author

Glad to hear it delivered! Yeah, I might have tipped my hand but I didn't want the twist to come completely out of left field.

Expand full comment

It always fascinates me how we get from prompt to ending. I like how this one seemed to start at “What’s the worst thing you could see through a window?” and went from there. And I like where it ended up.

Expand full comment
author

Thanks! Glad you liked it. Yeah, I liked that it's his job to look in windows and he finds it distasteful but does it anyway. Also that the solution should be solid windows, keeping things behind closed doors and in secret, rather than being open and honest.

Expand full comment