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I like poetry and this had a good flow and rhymes. Just might enjoy this site.

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Thanks! Glad you like it. This one’s a bit odd for me as usually I always write in proper meter but dreams are weird and offbeat so I opted for something weird and offbeat - nine syllables per line (odd for English poetry) except for lines 9-12 which are seven syllables.

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Very fun.

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