A guest post from
who writes at the . We ‘met’ on Substack last week discussing the nature of poetry in the comments of another post. I love the imagery in this poem. I won’t mention specifics so you can experience it for yourself.-Adam
The Raised Bed
Armed with stones—about the size of a shoebox—my father constructed a flower bed. I, a quiet boy, sat among grasshoppers feeling his deep exhales. build (I thought for me) this castle topped with geraniums and zinnias. Rising—my hands joined with my father’s hands and he let me place my hands on the grainy slab so that he held the stone above me and I, beneath and in front of him, as sturdy Atlas I bore this present world. We settled the stone into its corner and, hands on his, pushed it into place.